http://fromthepyramid.blog.co.uk/This is a place to write about various subjects from the many game worlds I use for role playing. I play assorted games from AD&D to Gamma World, Rifts to Heroes, etc. Please leave comments... Enjoy!en-USMokoFeed10http://fromthepyramid.blog.co.uk/http://data5.blog.de/design/preview/ae/4d1a9cb8233e802e64984e564fb030_160x200.jpghttp://fromthepyramid.blog.co.uk/2007/09/27/crystal_thoughts_part_1~3049167/#c4766322tag:fromthepyramid.blog.co.uk,2007-09-27:/2007/09/27/crystal_thoughts_part_1~3049167/#c4766322Thu, 27 Sep 2007 20:32:02 +0200There, all tidy.<br> <br> Remember to indent the first line of new paragraph. One uses a three space indentation but properly it should be five. The things one is not taught in school, ffs.<br> <br> You may note the rearrangement of certain portions of the dialogue. It isn't needful to make a new line for each utterance. Where you appear to be working in blocks of thoughts, a new line would indicate a mental shift to another thought/subject. A quick read should illustrate what one means by this for you. If not, one welcomes later Q & A upon it.<br> <br> Tenses...damnably difficult. One confesses to trouble with that herself. Again, a quick read should clarify one's meaning. If not, add it to the Q & A list for later.<br> <br> One hopes this will taken in a constructive meaning and spirit, it is certainly intended in no other way.<br> <br> May your afternoon be plesant, your ever more so! <br> <br> FFhttp://fromthepyramid.blog.co.uk/2007/09/27/crystal_thoughts_part_1~3049167/#c4766322http://fromthepyramid.blog.co.uk/2007/09/26/its_a_place_to_put_my_thoughts~3041371/#c4763603tag:fromthepyramid.blog.co.uk,2007-09-27:/2007/09/26/its_a_place_to_put_my_thoughts~3041371/#c4763603Thu, 27 Sep 2007 16:10:01 +0200Well, it's about time! Good to see you here.<br> Please feel free to use my warning in the first post I made. One cannot be too careful these days and legalities require fair worning be given in some localities. Use with my blessing and happy blogging!http://fromthepyramid.blog.co.uk/2007/09/26/its_a_place_to_put_my_thoughts~3041371/#c4763603